Type i dohundred a minute;
Speak i do
dime a dozen
Mind of mine
runs as fast as it can,
Brain trying hard
to catch up and stay focussed
Plenty of times
lose track of reality,
Dreams and castles
i build in air and around me.
Crash boom bang
jolted back to reality
"Ah, found you finally"
they exclaim!
did i want to be found??
loving it, running amidst my fantasies
safe and protected
knowing there is no pain or hurt
"Life", i know, is built on hopes
and wishes
do they come alive?
or are they just lost?
as lost as me?
Aaarti (c) 28th April '08
Random thots floating in my head as i saw that picture, so i let it wander away..... :-)
6 comments:
ohh u did a good jobb letting the pen write whtever it wanted.
coz it is nice...!
maes perfect sense also....
//"Life", i know, is built on hopes
and wishes
do they come alive?
or are they just lost?
as lost as me?
//
i m right now in a similar state of mind :-)
wander brain!
I loved exactly the same 4 lines that veens has pointed out..!! :) H.m.m.. Sooo lost in the wilderness of nothingness in ourselves..!!
nice...some words were so true ..
even though this poem of urs is not following any rhythmic pattern...it really made an enjoyable read :)
kavithai..kavithai :)
and reg ARR concert, yea it was not properly arranged, the facilities were not at all there, but still ARR more than made for every other negatives.......... it sure was a veryyyyyyyyyyyyy enjoyableeeeee time :)
very well pointed out...nice flow of words...like the way you write...i have been exploring your blog these days..
happy blogging and happy life..!!!
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