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Am a contradiction of sorts. i love going out and having a good time with friends, and i can also stay home chill out over a book or a movie.. Am very passionate about writing, so give me a topic and watch me float away into wonderland... I Am crazy about music,books,friends and my doggie... :)

March 16, 2008

[Writers Island] She stares...

For this week's prompt on Writer's Island..

walking into the room
light shining
in the corner of her eyes

strides across the floor
wrapping hands around shoulder
keeping her soul warm

sun begins to set
gentle rays streaming
through the crack in the window

she watches in awe

feeling safe and warm
alone, at last
she sits...
she stares...

Aaarti (c) 17th march 08 @ 11.38pm[IST]


Richard said...

Very nice, quite evocative. Looking forward to more of your work.

anthonynorth said...

Very nicely done. I liked this.

Meghna said...

I loved this one. Well written Aarti!

Constance said...

"wrapping hands around shoulder
keeping her soul warm" is such a lovely image. Very nice!

Anonymous said...


glad u started doing it...i mean 3W....and prompts thingy... i will visit more often Aarti!