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Am a contradiction of sorts. i love going out and having a good time with friends, and i can also stay home chill out over a book or a movie.. Am very passionate about writing, so give me a topic and watch me float away into wonderland... I Am crazy about music,books,friends and my doggie... :)

March 12, 2008

Mind...

My first attempt at the 3WW prompt... do let me know what you thought... just a few words that i managed to string together... :)


Saw u standing tall
looking cool and distant
do i need an apology?
my mind, it began
to consider the options

Oh,what the heck
out slid the transparent plastic
slip it underneath n
let the water pour
out your blue snout

Sigh! my heart relaxed..
You were not mad at me..

:) yep, its a bit quirky, but i went with my hands, just letting them type out the words.. and well, decided not to meddle too much and to let it be... :)

7 comments:

vEENs said...

I m poetry-illiterate.. seriously :(

but i do like the usuage! I mean .. I would neva have thought of something like this !!

:))

priya said...

Something different and nice.

priya said...

Veens,

Poems come from heart and I feel anybody can write it unless you try to become professional.

Go give a try and enjoy. Its all about learning process.

priya said...

Aaarti,

Sent u an invite for librarything.

Aaarti said...

Hey veens.. priya is absolutely write.. dont think,jus let the keyboard/pen do the talking...:)

Priya- thanks..n thanks some more... :)

സപ്ന അനു ബി. ജോര്‍ജ്ജ് said...

wow, very soothing, very versetile

സപ്ന അനു ബി. ജോര്‍ജ്ജ് said...

wow, very soothing, very versetile