Trees dancing wildly
to the tunes of the wind
People running helter skelter
to the force of the breeze
Water gushing forth
keeping pace with the pouring rain
Roads flooded to the brim
keeping up with water flowing down
Rains, pouring down on earth
with a vengence
Floods, racing down the streets
with a purpose
Life, it comes to a stand still
no way out
Fear and danger
looming dark on everyone's mind
Thunder so loud,
roaring through the skies
lightening so sharp and bright
piercing through the night sky
oh,rain... wont you calm down
oh,clouds, wont you settle down
please oh,please
rain rain..
please ease up wont you....
Aaarti (c) 31st Oct 07
9 comments:
I love rain but not the one which destroys. It shud be a soft drizzle here and ther and shud take a walk slightly drenched.
Lovely.
I love the rain sometimes. It just washes everything and suddenly all is clean and green. :)
By the way, I tried sending you an SMS, calling you today but the number was unreachable! I am back in Madras!
Hi AAArti,
You visited me , and saw my "cows'art'video' " thanks so much for your visit.
I like your blog, you are very creative with words, are you making poems for a profession?
Its so wonderfull your words!
My compliments.
:) JoAnn from Holland
lovely words...you have crafted them beautifully...I just love rains & it autumatically brings a music to my heart....very nice!
@ Priya - yep,i love that kinda rain too.. this i wrote while trying to imagine what it'd be like it rained non stop :)
@ Vidya - hopefully we will meet before u leave.. lolz.. :D
@JoAnn - yes, i had and i loved ur picturess ..they are so warm and beautiful..
thanks for ur lovely comments..
how did you guess? yes, i do write for profession(but not poetry),its mostly web content. :)
have a wonderful day
@ Kalyan - thankss..yes,music has a way of doing that to us..:)
Hmmm...never knew Aarti the poetess...you sure have the way with words...:-)
that was quite...it seems there was a lull which gave you a breath to write...a lull in the sense a shell....it seems you are both amazed and perplexed by the power something which we cannot see has :)
Mazhai oru super matter. Ana adey theevirama irukumbothu, it can be devastating.
Nice one....
rain is beautiful as long as I am not drenched :) but jokes apart, lovely thoughts and rain is poetic
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