For this week's prompt on Writer's Island..
walking into the room
light shining
in the corner of her eyes
strides across the floor
wrapping hands around shoulder
keeping her soul warm
sun begins to set
gentle rays streaming
through the crack in the window
spellbound
she watches in awe
feeling safe and warm
alone, at last
she sits...
she stares...
Aaarti (c) 17th march 08 @ 11.38pm[IST]
walking into the room
light shining
in the corner of her eyes
strides across the floor
wrapping hands around shoulder
keeping her soul warm
sun begins to set
gentle rays streaming
through the crack in the window
spellbound
she watches in awe
feeling safe and warm
alone, at last
she sits...
she stares...
Aaarti (c) 17th march 08 @ 11.38pm[IST]
Very nice, quite evocative. Looking forward to more of your work.
ReplyDeleteVery nicely done. I liked this.
ReplyDeleteI loved this one. Well written Aarti!
ReplyDelete"wrapping hands around shoulder
ReplyDeletekeeping her soul warm" is such a lovely image. Very nice!
LOVELY....
ReplyDeleteglad u started doing it...i mean 3W....and prompts thingy... i will visit more often Aarti!