March 29, 2008

[Two for Tuesday] Start over..

My 1st attempt on Two for Tuesday prompts...



The night was cold
streets were empty
the silent moon
glowing in the dark

knew not if the act
he committed
was right or wrong
just felt right

knew he had to
cross the mountain
leaving behind
forgotten memories

trudging towards
new pastures
new life
new hopes
new dreams.....

Aaarti (c) 30th march


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6 comments:

  1. AnonymousMar 29, 2008, 9:11:00 PM

    the right or wrong..can never be decided... we have to hope that what we did is right...and move on/

    Nicely written :)

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  2. AnonymousMar 29, 2008, 11:53:00 PM

    just felt right...hmmm...as long as we always feel we are right nothing will go wrong..

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  3. Arti HonraoMar 30, 2008, 10:49:00 AM

    knew he had to
    cross the mountain
    leaving behind
    forgotten memories


    We too do the same thing often, right?

    Good work




    GBU
    Arti

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  4. ChakoliMar 31, 2008, 5:37:00 PM

    Is it ur 1st trail....it dosent seems to be:-0)))


    good one:_)))

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  5. anthonynorthMar 31, 2008, 10:57:00 PM

    Very nicely done.

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  6. MeghnaApr 1, 2008, 4:35:00 PM

    Hi Arti,
    A lovely poem! Loved the feel of it...each day brings new hopes, new dreams, new lives.....
    Awesome :)

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