Saw u standing tall
looking cool and distant
do i need an apology?
my mind, it began
to consider the options
Oh,what the heck
out slid the transparent plastic
slip it underneath n
let the water pour
out your blue snout
Sigh! my heart relaxed..
You were not mad at me..
:) yep, its a bit quirky, but i went with my hands, just letting them type out the words.. and well, decided not to meddle too much and to let it be... :)
I m poetry-illiterate.. seriously :(
ReplyDeletebut i do like the usuage! I mean .. I would neva have thought of something like this !!
:))
Something different and nice.
ReplyDeleteVeens,
ReplyDeletePoems come from heart and I feel anybody can write it unless you try to become professional.
Go give a try and enjoy. Its all about learning process.
Aaarti,
ReplyDeleteSent u an invite for librarything.
Hey veens.. priya is absolutely write.. dont think,jus let the keyboard/pen do the talking...:)
ReplyDeletePriya- thanks..n thanks some more... :)
wow, very soothing, very versetile
ReplyDeletewow, very soothing, very versetile
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