as i walk along this lonely road
deep in the middle of the night
in the distance i see a light
a blink after another
and a gentle roar
look up at the sky
and plop,falls a raindrop in my face
sweet and gentle
tasting sweet as honey
clouds i see are crying
in happiness or sorrow i wonder
rain, oh,how i love those little drops
making me wanna dance
rejoice right there
in the midlde of the road
gentle rain
making the flower bloom
and soil green and happy
dont go away, stay here forever
look up at the sky
i plead with the One up above
rain rain
never go away....
Aaart (c) 12th oct 07 @ 6.35pm
deep in the middle of the night
in the distance i see a light
a blink after another
and a gentle roar
look up at the sky
and plop,falls a raindrop in my face
sweet and gentle
tasting sweet as honey
clouds i see are crying
in happiness or sorrow i wonder
rain, oh,how i love those little drops
making me wanna dance
rejoice right there
in the midlde of the road
gentle rain
making the flower bloom
and soil green and happy
dont go away, stay here forever
look up at the sky
i plead with the One up above
rain rain
never go away....
Aaart (c) 12th oct 07 @ 6.35pm
You Have Expressed Your Feeligs Extremely Well Asking The Rain Not To Go In Your Poem "Rain rain Don't Go Away" But while This May Be OK in Case Of Gentle Rain As In The Case Of Your Poem,What About The Day When It Rains Cats And Dogs Disrupting The Normal Life?Looking Forward To Another Poem From You Under This Changed Scenerio. Best Wishes. Regards BAIYU
ReplyDeleteNice shot, Aarti - reminds me of many happy Indian monsoons.
ReplyDeleteThe monsoon is a key chapter in my first novel, Vegemite Vindaloo.
@baiyu - thanks for the comments.. well, i've written one more and posted it last eve.. its on heavy rains.. chk it out and let me know....
ReplyDelete@David- nice to see you here.. glad to have helped you remember those days.. what is your novel about? would like to know more.. :)