October 13, 2007

Brewing liquid....

Yet another poem that i wrote for the Read-meet we had on 13th Oct at Mocha... the theme was Rain or beverage... one could either write on them individually or combine em as well. since my brain cells were a bit dried up , these were what i came up with.... :)


new day has dawned
sleep beckons
as i toss and turn
the aroma,
levitating me from the bed

senses, working overtime
following the trail
walking, as if in a daze
all i know now
is i need that brewing liquid
to jostle me from this
sweet sleep...

Aaarti (c)12th Oct

8 comments:

  1. //to jostle me from this
    sweet sleep...// and perhaps revitalise u..hmm i can smell the brew here..lol

    TC
    CU

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  2. Hullyoooooo!
    Sigh I so miss the Mocha at Chennai. I quite liked it. Oh I liked your poetry too. :)

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  3. lovely words...you have crafted it so beautifully ...nice poem!

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  4. Those words held the aroma of the beverage in itself !
    Nice one ! :)

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  5. gimme ur e mail id and i shall tell u my name :).where have ya vanished?no new post.

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  6. aaha !! lovely lines...:)
    u r writting so well..

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  7. Coffee is something i rarely drink 1st thing in the morning but i see ppl all around yearning for that hot cuppa that i was drawn to it and wrote this verse....

    thankssss to all of u..

    utopa- kinda caught up with that 4letter thing -"work"... also i find poetry comes to me, and i cant sit n make an attempt to write a poem.. :)

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  8. Hi Aarti,

    Thanks for visiting my blog and I'm so glad you liked the pictures.

    Nice to see so much creativity here.

    Cheers

    David

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